chapter.16 tom sawyer -

chapter.16 tom sawyer

11/11/2014

In The Adventures of Tom Sawyer chapter sixteen Tom, Huck, and Joe began to feel home sick after a few day on the island so they started a game of Indians to pass the time. This chapter show that time with friends can be fun but nothing beats the warmth and comfort of home. I remember the first time I went to camp in Vermont it was fun but after a few weeks I began to feel home sick but my friends comforted me and I was able to finish the session.

2 Comments

William

11/12/2014 03:37:13

I think that you had a great format but could use some more meat in this entry.

Sam Breault

11/17/2014 10:52:58

I like your personal experience, but you need some more “meat,” in other words: more writing! I do think the positive of this piece is that it is clear and good writing!

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